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for The Dark Ocean

by Rann

schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What! WHAT!!!
Dr. D back from the dead!!!!!!!!!! I think part of my brain popped.

Really good chapter, despite the cliffy. The fighting was described well and you did a good job of making it exciting.

Another 5/5 addition to my all-time favourite Kim Possible fic!
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, when it got to the much larger chapters, I just never had time to sit through and read. Now, I'm REALLY wishing I had made the time. The story and characters are complex, the emotion is palpable at times... it's just simply a great read. Of course, I read through all 18 chapters only to hit that cliffie at the end, so now I'm just anxious for more! lol

Eagerly awaiting more!
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, Kim turns criminal. This might be interesting to see how it works. I just hope my internet connection holds out.
person mouserr
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice rundown of a night on patrol and an ambush ... im sooo looking forward to seeing how these next coupla chapters go specially with Kim and crew being the badasses they are now. my bet is it gets really ugly really kwik
person mouserr
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
definitely liking the way Kim and crew are taking to this new way of doing things ... pretty solid way of doing things even with the slip of not making it clear to the 'boss' to keep his fool mouth shut about her appearance ... looks like GJs enforcers are on the trail finally which is gonna end up fugly id bet .. im even more curious bout this subject 1 character ... course the mention of him beating their asses doesnt bode well for their team when they face off against Kim and crew next

=^.^=
person Jarkota
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am *really* liking this, man. Nice to see one of the stories that inspired me hasn't gone into creative limbo.
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great one.But i have a question.WHat has GJ been doing all this time??
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When will more of this be put up??
person Nodrogs
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I really loved this. Am I correct in assuming the story you referred to in the beginning of chapter 5 (think it was 5) is 'A Small Possibilty' by... well, me?
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet again all I can say is wow...

It's so damn good! Keep it up!