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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome question is there going to be more ass play
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
super funny... :) lol... so Shego's out for revenge for her ass yet again? lol... gotta see that one... hope you update soon... :) adios for now...
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really are updating quite fast. There was a time not long ago when it was much easier to review the stuff being posted on this site.
While your prose wasn't as clear as some of the other stuff posted lately, it got stronger through the chapters and you've got some good intensity and some variety in the action. The best advice I can give here is that you should make sure the progression is more unpredictable. But I guess Shego's revenge is supposed to be the spanner in the works... ;)
While your prose wasn't as clear as some of the other stuff posted lately, it got stronger through the chapters and you've got some good intensity and some variety in the action. The best advice I can give here is that you should make sure the progression is more unpredictable. But I guess Shego's revenge is supposed to be the spanner in the works... ;)
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And All i can say about this story is Booyah!!!
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this one is nice!!!
please update soon
please update soon