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You know, I'm never sure whether I should feel sorry for Ron, or envious. I gotta say... sorry is way up there right now. lol

Eagerly awaiting more!

Very good work. you keep throwing more and more ladies into the mix. you're probably running low on (For lack of a better term) Fresh meat. so here are a few names of girls you haven't used yet, just in case you are interested.

Electronique, Summer Gale (Weather lady), Vivian Porter, Zita, Joss Possible and Miss Kyoko (Nakasumi ‘toy makers’ translator.

Myself, i'm hopeing to see some action with Joss Possible, Kim's cousin. after all she is now Ron's biggest fan.

Chao.

Awsome as usual didn't expect the two new additions to the sexcapades. This does have great potential to be an awsome ongoing series. I mean there are just so many combinations that can be done and so many female characters that keep getting added to the Kim Possible universe. Curious though if you are going to touch on the Dr's VF Porter and Renton (Felix's mom). Would be real interesting to see how they were included and brought in. And don't forget MC Honey! That bitch is hot! Oh and Heather I mean they are in Hollywood after all. So many women well laters.

:O :O :O You are Da Man Jayrich.....I hope Ron will crash the "interrogation" if you catch my drift :D I bet Ron wants to show him his "interrogation technique" :D for Camille

Well, have to give props for you continuing to find innovative ways of incorporating female characters into the story. However, aren't you running out of hottie fems to place in sexual situations with our favorite blonde sidekick?

Dude do not stop what you are doing with this story cause this a great story...(Looks left then right) "Huh were's Ed? Ring...Ring...Ring... Hello? YEAH BRO, SERIOUSLY!!! SLAM... Like I was saying (Ring) before I was (RIng) interupted (RIng) 'pulls out remote and pushs the big red button' AAAAAAUUUGGGHHH!!! Please keep up the great work.

OMG!!!! I can't wait for the next part of the hollywood chapters :D
I bet it's Ron's Monkey Powers that makes him irresistible to all the women in Middleton (and celebs :D )

The Bon factor? Totally not believable. Just an honest opinion. Try something else, like they can't spare a hoverjet or something to take them back.

This is a great addition to the whole Chapters series. Lovin the fact that you find new and creative ways for Ron's 'gift' to get him in 'deeper' so to speak. Looking forward to see what you got planned next for the Ronman. You gotta have him with MC Honey though I mean that chick is hawwwt! I mean damn if I was cartoon I would definately try to beat those.

Ok, first off. Good premise for this story. Reminds me of Spectre666's Addictive series. Secondly, you've got to pick a timeframe for this story, past or present tense; you can't have both. Thirdly, what is with the odd capitalization? You don't need to capitalize every couple of words. Lastly, you do realize you're supposed to start a new line when a new character speaks, right? When one gets done or is interrupted, start a new line for the new character speaking.