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by Jayrich

schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story......... So where is the new great story of KP and Ron,etc? LOL
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
We love the chapter but are sorry to see the finale so soon. We love all the adventures Ron and Kim have been in with their friends in your story and can only hope that you keep on writing here at AFF. My girlfriend was wondering if you ever thought of doing a seperate story of Ron turned back into Zorpox and having some naughty fun with the girls, Shego included. (Not like in Zorpox BLue Death) But still please keep up the great work and we hope to see you again soon with another great story.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that I have loved this story. The adult adventures of Kim Possible. lol

Seriously though, a lot of this reads just like an episode at times... just with... you know... a lot of gratuitous sex involved.

Looking forward to your next story!
person Kothoga
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job with the finale of the story, I bet you never thought you can write a story that you started almost 1 year ago with sooo much action and sex
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice series. I love how you still managed to make it fit into canon KP Continuity, right up to the end. Nicely done.
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
9 foot tall Amazon alien woman... and Ron... man, this better go well for Ron, cause otherwise he's gonna be in some serious trouble! lol
person MDR
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeease tell me that Kim never got it on with Junior! It doesn't seem that she did, but I don't want any chance. I like Kim being a one-man (Ron) kinda gal (yeah, yeah, hypocritical I know, since I like Ron getting it on with lots of diff girls, but what can you do?).

A little discontinuity though. Considering what has gone on in a couple of previous chapters, Shego should know that KP has no problems with getting it on with other girls. Hell, KP was shoving a toy up Shego's ass not too long ago, and just a chapter ago Shego found a very ravished shapechanger handcuffed and well used by 'Princess'.

I look forward to future chapters!
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man great chapter really can't wait to see what happens next
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The chapters just get better and better. I have to wonder whats going to happen to warmonga and Drakken after Ron gets free and sees how hurt Kim is.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice addition to the chapters. Makes you feel really bad for Shego getting fucked that much (and not in a good way). Can't wait to see what you got planned for the Green Lady next. Hope it involves a bit of the old 'how's your father' eh eh know what I mean. A bit of the 'slap and tickle' wink wink nudge nudge! I'm talking about her having sex I guess is the point that I'm trying to drive home here. Well we'll see.