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by Morgoth22

person Sonie
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ron is too nice of a guy to do something with the girls like that.But i hope the girls talk him in to it.
person The Dark
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Incredibly in depth and well written. More. We want more! Update soon.
person ZAPPER
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude if ron save them, what are these sex crazies girls gone do to him?
person BOBKEN
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
remember the famous song hero. Well i hope ron can be there hero. (P.S. LOVE THE STORY)
person Lantern1984
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're as infuriating as Rowling! Writing such good work and then keeping us waiting for more! I drives me insane!
person Jason Barnett
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will you be finishing this story? I'm hoping you will but then you only finished one of the stories at the MC Forum
person Horatius
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AN excellent story so far. I'll be the first one to admit that I"m not usually a fan of hardcore, but I'm taking a definite likig to this one. NO w all you have to do is finish this. If the girls are being brainwashed it should make their lives interesting even after the rescue (now that they're being brainwashed voluntarily, even moreso). I really need to see how this one ends. KEep it up.
person RONFAN
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope there is some what happy end for the girls and ron.
person Mr. Secret
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats right anon. I will more chapters too!
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Would you please hurry up? The wait is killing me.