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by Morgoth22

schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gret writing i hope there's more
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This really is a good story and it pains me to see that you have apparently abandonded it. I encourage you to finish what you have started and if you won't, then I would like your permission to finish it myself and possibly even do a sequal. Please let me know.
person johnohex
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Of course you realise reverse psychology is a cliche?
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, quit keeping us in suspense already and update. Come on, this story is intense. You can't just leave it hanging there of all places.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If the author won't finish it, could some one else?
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on man, when are you going to update. This story is excellently thought out and it would be a shame to just leave it like this.
person Skeeve
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOO EVIL Fellow!! You have a great story here. I love the concept, it flows well and is very Captivating. But when are you going to publish the rest of the story? Let your fans know whats going on!!
person Cold-Chaos
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Come on the story's nothing if there's nothing left. I must continue otherwise it plain sucks! And I know you don't want it to suck.
person Mr. Secret
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is time that your write more chapters on this storie! I wait too!
person Sean
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more, please do your best to post the next chapter as soon as you're able to