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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Keels over and promptly dies* WHY DID YOU STOP THERE
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice. i thought the dancing scenes were a little odd, just cuz i can't imagine them dancing with each other IN FRONT of the crew, ya know? anywho, i like very much! can't wait for chapter 4 and some smut!! ^__^
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Well written and entertaining except for the fact that you keep referring to sokka as "the peasent" outside of Zuko's POV. That is kinda irritating, its as if you "the author" consider him as such instead of it just being withing the POV of the characters. See what Im saying? Anyhoo, very entertaing, keep up the good work and update soon.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BOOYAH! That was wicked! It must be hard working 4 jobs. I get stressed just working one job.
But yay! The love is blossoming! And hot spring sex is wonderful. Mmmm...I'm glad someone started the Zukka love here on AFF. I can't wait for you to write more ^_^ Also, don't forget, toys are ALWAYS fun!
But yay! The love is blossoming! And hot spring sex is wonderful. Mmmm...I'm glad someone started the Zukka love here on AFF. I can't wait for you to write more ^_^ Also, don't forget, toys are ALWAYS fun!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my....
I love it. Please update soon!
I love it. Please update soon!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha love it can't wait for more chapters
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'first brought you on bord' small typo, but update! update NOW!!! want MORE Zuka!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it ^^ and great read all a round but it was to short! T_T more please?
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Iroh is a genius =)
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeee! Zuko and Sokka!! *happy yaoi dance* Please write more of this lovely story. Yay for plotting uncles. Can the next chapter have some lime or lemon in it???