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for Lovers in a Dangerous Time

by KitsuneGirl800

person dreaming_Gemini
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So...this was hot! gods, what am I saying this was the hottest thing I've read. It's hard to find this pairing and even harder to find them in these situations. I thought the writting was done well, just look out for missing words and wrong words being used I saw some of that. Kind of trips me when I read. Anyway I like the way they act with each other *other time than with the sex* and I can't wait to read more. Are you still working on this story? reply to me please
dreaming_gemini
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, best story with ths pairing ever. Like how they eased into the lovely smex.
person Dragon7
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
person Samantha
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Insert fangirl scream here.This is one of the cutest and steamiest fics out there<3 I love it!!!
person Maggie
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, very, very well done. Though I'm not a big fan of reading these with only the promise of a lemon, I really enjoyed reading this. Particularly the dance scene in the 3rd chapter- fantastic beyond words. Good job and keep up the good work, please~!
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad you like my name!!! :D i think it's depressing that zuko and sokka are having communication problems...if only they told each other how they feel... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
ASOTA
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Must say, this is one of my favorites. And chapter 5 was amazing. I love the thought and meaning behinds markings (psych major, does it show?) so I really loved the "wear them with pride" bit. So good, so good *hearts*
person sheraven
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you are a master at Zuko's dialogue. I loved the line, "I'll show you how a prince beds warriors." I also really enjoyed the small touches, like Zuko drawing out Sokka's fever. There were quite a few spelling errors, but all in all, an excellent story. Thank you.
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is pure Zukka goodness. I hope there will be more to this story soon. :D
person Tabberwok
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great to see you're back!! i was wondering if i should keep checking this story. xD Glad i did. Greeeeaaat! *gutteral noises of approval* Love your writing style :)