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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, YES! an update! Oh how long have i been waiting for this! Ah but it was worth the wait :) So amazing! I love how they interact. And can I say from where it looks like ur taking this story, its sounding like its going to be a nice long, in depth story, instead of just a great get together porn story like i first thought lol. Oh I hope the wait for the next chapter isnt as long :P and can i just ask.... Will they get their candies back???? lol or at least get more?
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU UPDATED! I was in the hospital when you did, no wonder I missed it! No, I haven't actually read anything yet >.> Justin and I have both agreed that we need to simply start all over again ^_^ I promise, there will be a real review when we read everything again! WE MISSED YOU!
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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!!! this is such an amazing story and you are such an amazing author!!! I want more!!!! I'm begging for more!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! Don't make me wait too much longer!!!!!!!I'll 'splode!!!!!!
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, dilemmas dilemmas... Bad for character's mental stability, but the stuff that stories are made of. ;b As for the grammar stuff I mentioned last time, hey it all looked good from here- I didn't notice any problems with this chapter. Thumbs up! =]
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July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Since Zukka is, for some unknown reason, my favourite pairing in ATLA, I had read the first few chapters of this brilliant story some time ago, but just hadn't gotten around to actually leaving a review (sorry about that). :)
I love the way that you write the sex scenes, they are urgent, intense, detailed, and full of passion (well I enjoyed them, lol). The way that you have been able to keep both Zuko and Sokka so in character, as you've gently brought them together, is really impressive. If there was anything about them that seemed a little OOC to me, it was the willingness of Sokka to so readily submit to Zuko. While I do prefer this paring to work this way, I can't see Sokka, as the sole representative of his people on board an enemy ship, being so willing to spread his legs for Zuko, however much he might enjoy doing so. I'd expect him to at least try to dominate Zuko at some point, even if he fails miserably, lol. ;)
I wonder what will happen next, will Zhao capture the Avatar, leaving Zuko and Sokka to work together to try and rescue him. Or perhaps Zuko, as a teenage boy, will try to have both his cake and eat it by attempting to capture Aang and Katara, and then offering to free Katara if Sokka will agree to stay with him. Or perhaps something else involving lots more hawt buttsex, I can't wait. :D
Update soon! =)
I love the way that you write the sex scenes, they are urgent, intense, detailed, and full of passion (well I enjoyed them, lol). The way that you have been able to keep both Zuko and Sokka so in character, as you've gently brought them together, is really impressive. If there was anything about them that seemed a little OOC to me, it was the willingness of Sokka to so readily submit to Zuko. While I do prefer this paring to work this way, I can't see Sokka, as the sole representative of his people on board an enemy ship, being so willing to spread his legs for Zuko, however much he might enjoy doing so. I'd expect him to at least try to dominate Zuko at some point, even if he fails miserably, lol. ;)
I wonder what will happen next, will Zhao capture the Avatar, leaving Zuko and Sokka to work together to try and rescue him. Or perhaps Zuko, as a teenage boy, will try to have both his cake and eat it by attempting to capture Aang and Katara, and then offering to free Katara if Sokka will agree to stay with him. Or perhaps something else involving lots more hawt buttsex, I can't wait. :D
Update soon! =)
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Best Update ever and it was worth waiting for! I hope more are to come Soon! Great Update Keep it up.
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job, I love the blossoming realtionship between Sokka and Zuko. Please update again when you can.
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, that was very entertaining and satisfying to read. Thanks for sharing, and I will be looking for more should you post it. =]
Constructive criticism: You have some grammar errors, using words that sound correct, and are spelled correctly, but which don't mean what you are trying to convey. I noticed in this last chapter one instance of "vain" (prideful) when it should have been "vein" (blood vessel) and also "excepted" (set apart) when it should have been "accepted" (received with consent).
Constructive criticism: You have some grammar errors, using words that sound correct, and are spelled correctly, but which don't mean what you are trying to convey. I noticed in this last chapter one instance of "vain" (prideful) when it should have been "vein" (blood vessel) and also "excepted" (set apart) when it should have been "accepted" (received with consent).
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww <3
this is so cute and hot! XD i can't wait to read more!
this is so cute and hot! XD i can't wait to read more!
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
of all the Avatar slash I've read so far this has got to be the best. I love Sokka/Zuko and I imagine it developing just like this story. to me, your Sokka and Zuko are very well in-character (plus I can totally see Iroh doing that). I hope there's more; I'd love to see what happens when Sokka meets the gang again.