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I'm g;ad that somebody did a boondocks story, an dont worry you'll never see a flame from me, unless im wearin the colors haha!! GoodJob

Back That Ass Up is a Juvie classic and just for making reference to that 1ne song makes you like one the best writers out in Internet Land, though it would have been funny if riley started rappin One Blood (Its Okay) by The Game (Love that nigga, he sick)

Keep Up UR works, my black ass aint goin nowhere

I only got this to say

If Ms. Berry (you know the one im talkin bout!) came to my house dressed as a Nun and told me that she wanted to have my baby, I think that i would DIE on the spot, Riley is a walkin fictional PIMP!!!!

Thats all i wanted to say, ummm........... GOODJOB!!!!!

You are doing great on this story, I hope to be able to read more as soon as you can update. If you are willing, I'd like to make a suggestion for the sequel, in the sequel maybe you could have Riley knock-up Sara?

Nice work on the chapter, but the lemon could have been longer (no offence meant). Please do your best to update this fic ASAP. Also, any chance of you adding a Huey/ Jazzmine lemon in a chapter?

plz u hav ta update dis story is gettin good!

I just love this, I can't wait to see if Riley got Sara knocked up, please say that will happen to her. Also I would love to see if you could turn Sara from a nice young woman into a nasty sluty bitch that she was ment to be for Riley, also do you think she would work with Riley when he's out with Ed and Gin robbing a Bank, because she would be a real bad girl then.

I love your story so far, please do your best to add chapter 4 ASAP. The only chritizism I can think of is that you might want to add more Sara/Riley sex parts

I thought this story was excellent, I agree with the first reviewer about Riley being a bit OOC in chapter one though, but you made up for it in chapter two with him singing back that ass up. I think this story has great potential, and I hope many more people review it, I also hope you continue it, the thought of Sara having sex with anyone besides that "fucking pansy" Tom, is plenty enough reason to read this fic, but don't take that last remark too far and have her having sex with anybody but Riley, they look cute together. Hope to see an update soon.

It's an Ok PWP. I would like to see there relationship develop more. I would like to see Riley use Jazmine to make Sara and Huey jealous and cause a huge ass stir up. ^^ Keep going.