rate_review Reviews

Waaah 8D Damn, that hawt! Although it sounded... not quite right to me having Dib call Zim 'baby' and use all that common dirty talk on him. More like it should be tailored to fit the person. Like call him 'space-boy' instead? You know, I never really considered Zim as having both parts... that thing where he hids his manhood in a sheath I expected, but... and WHY would Dib bring that thing that he shoved up Zim's nether-regions for a ruitine examination? Ah, but explanations would just ruin the story, neh? Still, I enjoyed this story most thoroughly, especially since I"m a big SemeDib/UkeZim fan :D Much love for this PWP! <3

*applauds* Brilliant! So hot and oh so very sexy. Excellent work on this, it's probably the most well written PWP I've ever seen. The ending was what made it for me, though *still laughing* You're excellent at the art of description as well; I love how you described Zim and Dib's bodies, with Zim's being all smooth and curvy. Very nice.

Florville