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for Worked Up So Sexual

by muu

person Mary
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally like seme Dib but...... damn. Nice job.
person 'Nilla
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is... ugh, this is so damn wonderful. And Dib dirty-talking? Win. Absolute win. So unexpectedly sexy. And uhm, giving Zim male and female anatomy? Oh, I just love your mind. I wish I could see even more.
person Bernibee
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was so hot! O_O
I like the idea of Zim being the bitch too heehe!
person Kya
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm...Had to stick my hand in my pants for that one. Thanks much!
person Skittles The Sugar Fairy
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely adored it. I think it has to be one of the best fics on the site. I adored the way the characters were very in character. I see Zim being very ashamed of his body, being short and then I also see the Irken's as being very prudish. Zim's emotions were fantastically done. Dib too.

The descriptions and style of writing were very unique and well thought out. I loved it. Please do another fic or another chapter. With more Uke!Zim, cause it rocks my socks. Obey the Socks!
person ThisOneEternal
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* great ending ^.^ I quite enjoyed this.
person LL28
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg.. that was so hott. your good, your good...
person LawWren
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*drool* I like this... I like this a lot...

I really like the descriptions you used. Totally hot. You are really talented with detail work. Hope you write more for this piece, I really love the ending. And GIR, he always makes me laugh. He's so dumb it's cute.

Please write more. I'll give you cookies... cooookiiies... yeah.
person Penname wa Silver B
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aahhh... now I remember what I like about ZaDR. The sex. Not in a superficial way - I mean the interactions, and events leading up to it. This is the only way I can really see them together - in the ultimate clash of carnality, realizing that they need each other.
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A++! Fabulous! I adore it. I really like the idea of Irkens having both a male and female sex. So hot. The "baby" thing kinda threw me off too, especially since my fiancé calls me "baby doll," LOL. But it's fine, really.

*begs for more*