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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a different, but good chapter. I was admittedly surprised, but pleased, that this chpater wasn't a conclusion. Ron's reaction, Shego's threat, and the clever twist at the end put the story on something of a more serious note, while Ron's multiple disappontments made the chapter funny too.
I like Kim's initial reaction to Ron's unexpected relevation, as well as the girls' nochalant attitudes. I also like the continuity displayed when Shego wanted Ron to say her name. (As opposed to Kim's like he used to)
I like Kim's initial reaction to Ron's unexpected relevation, as well as the girls' nochalant attitudes. I also like the continuity displayed when Shego wanted Ron to say her name. (As opposed to Kim's like he used to)
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Too bad you didn't bring in Monique to enjoy the party. She'd probably love to lose her cherry to Ron.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, is it hot in here or just this smut...
I've gotta say nice job other than the fact that while this is a great smut tale, I've pretty much deleted Ron and Kim from the story. Because they're not in these characters just their names are. If I don't think that way I get pissed because Kim's using Ron as a sex toy and once she gets bored with him its out with the used dildo he goes. And I don't like that thought.
Since your walking down the proverbial street are we gonna see Monique, Mrs. Dr. P, Zita, Dr. Director, the rest of the cheer squad, etc start getting in on the Ron action. Or is Ron finally gonna wake up?? I have no problem with you extending this story but I'd really like you to have him wake up...
I've gotta say nice job other than the fact that while this is a great smut tale, I've pretty much deleted Ron and Kim from the story. Because they're not in these characters just their names are. If I don't think that way I get pissed because Kim's using Ron as a sex toy and once she gets bored with him its out with the used dildo he goes. And I don't like that thought.
Since your walking down the proverbial street are we gonna see Monique, Mrs. Dr. P, Zita, Dr. Director, the rest of the cheer squad, etc start getting in on the Ron action. Or is Ron finally gonna wake up?? I have no problem with you extending this story but I'd really like you to have him wake up...
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I look forward to hearing more stories from this series. Kim's nature seems spot on with her agressive manner imo.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i real what to know wat rons gona do when he find out
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work on the chapter 5, I'm waiting for the next one. Keep 'em coming and keep up the good work
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't help but think that Kim is a little too sure of her ability to smooth over things with Ron hen he wakes up...
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG you evil, a great writer but just plain evil (grins)! Please tell me you're planning on finishing what you started and have Ron-man either wake up during or find out after what happening.. He won't mind, hell if he's as good asleep as you've shown, bet he blows them both out of their mind awake.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh, one of the best KP fanfics ive ever read, keep up the great work
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bloody fantastic.