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for Deep Sleeper

by Jawelik

person Pat Squared
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So one down and half of Middleton High to go. So how many girls are going to get knocked up before you finish this tale. I could see the Barefoot and Pregnant Club of Middleton High grow exponentially. Maybe Ron decides to give all the girls private interactive lessons about the birds and the bees. Keep writing.
person Black Whole
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, awsome. The story is really great, and I think you should keep going. I was a bit surprised to hear Shego got pregnant off of Ron. I love your story, keep up the good work!
person frank
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow
person Master
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I respect you human.
person astria
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I knew all that unprotected ron sex would result in pregnancy I knew it! reading all those other chapters I was thinking, damn hes gunna have alot of illigitamet children! Im in favor of him staying with she-go for the munchkins sake and totally pissing off kim! Hey it dosent have to be love, actually that would probably make the shego-ron thing more interesting.

hoping to see more soon
astria
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good so far
person Dutchman
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who would have thunk it? Out of all those girls only Shego gets preg. Sounds to me like Ron has his ultimate revenge already. Kim is sure to want one when she finds out Shego has Ron's kid. Will he give in or hold his ground?
person Angel
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the way Ron got some of his payback, and finding out that Ron is the father of Shego's baby will make Kim regrett from ever sharing Ron agian. (UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!)
person Cold-Chaos
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Nice chapter. I love that Ron did not just give in to the women and made each one suffer a bit. It just felt right, but man that news when he was with Shego was surprising. I would call it the ultimate payback to Kim and the rest, but hows Ron going to deal with it? Anyway Great chapter Later:)
person link is so cool
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have a few words to describe this so far DAM BITCHIN AND HOLY HELL