rate_review Reviews

Nuts. I guess this story is on permanent by now. It's damned shame, but at least it ended on something of a conclusion. Thanks for all the inspired work.

That story was sick, wrong, immoral, depraved, and extremely indecent. And I loved every word of it oh my God the fact that Ron was the slumber land sex god was priceless. I mean it starts out innocent enough w/ some curiosity and hot sex, but then it just blows up into this huge thing man and chapter 6 was hi-larious I really did not see that comin at all. You my friend are a genius if this story was a chick I would fuck it, if it were food I would rub it on the chick eat it off her and fuck her again, if it were a movie I would watch religiously and have sex w/ the story chick while watching it. Great job man can't wait for the next chapter and to see how you wrap this thing awsome just awesome.

That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)

Fantastic story. Your writing is very entertaining and well done. Looking forward to the future chapters.

Well, presuming you still have more to tell, I'd love to see more instalments in this story.

Loved it. Please update soon. I can see Ron knock up Mrs. Dr. Possible and all the other girls Kim shared him with while forcing Kim to change the diapers without having any Ronshine. Also have him seduce the Catholic cheerleader.

Great story, please continue - I'd have Ron really lay into Kim about the consequences of her actions. He's a frekin' father! and she really did do something degrading and awful, even if if was hot and she liked it.

can you please update soon?! i've been waiting a longg time. and i love your story!

can you please update soon?! i've been waiting a longg time. and i love your story!

Come on continue the story, its no good if its not done.