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Hmmmm, very interesting story. A couple things I would like to point out though, before reading the next chapter. What Kim was doing, in regards to the acupressure thing, was essentially date-rape. She might as well have been slipping roofies into his drink. And as such, is no better than a man doing the same to an unsuspecting girl. She should think about that, and feel remorse. It seems that over the past year Ron stopped being her friend, and became a mere blowup doll. From all appearences, her desire to have sex with him overrode any friendship they had.
Ron had a very good point when he said that she took his first time away from him, and even took away any memories of living his every erotic dream. I just don't know how she can repay that sort of thing. Its not like he can just have sex with her while she is asleep...she would probably like it, and would definately know it was happening. The only way I can see this realistically having a 'happy' ending is if Kim and Monique (his two friends) honestly came to regret what they did.
Anyways, this has been a very intersting story, and I look forward to reading the rest!

Nice chapter! but don't forget that Kim is not the only guilty party here. Every single girl that used him (The Cheer Squard, Monique, Yori, Bonnie, etc.), every single 'friend' that used him is guilty and should be punished.
If you are open to a suggestion, how about this. Have Ron screw each of them. Give each girl several days of just alone-time with Ron. Have him screw them so completely that they would never feel satisfied with another man again. Masterbation, boyfriends, one-night flings, none of them can compare, and as such torments them. Eventually, after they realize fully what they had done, he can come back into their lives and make them happy again (this would of course become a Ron/Harem fic), though chastised.
Just a thought.

Great story I would of thought nothing better than that... I hope you make a update soon it was a good story.. Hope to see a update soon and please keep up the great chapters..

Ahh, that was perfectly done. I'm definitely anxious to see more of Kim's punishment, especially as he starts to seriously make the rounds through school.

Eagerly awaiting more!

Thank you so much for getting that whole bill thing taken care of. A little extreme cutting it off for non pay though. Good to see that you havent lost your touch though. This chapter was definately well worth the wait. Nothing like a little punishment fitting the crime. Can't wait for the upcoming chapters and welcome back.

Glad to see you online :D I have been waiting for this story to continue....and the 7th chapter was awesome....
I can't wait for the next one and too see what happens in it

Great chapter. Really hot, even in the more subtle stuff. It's a really emotionally charged dynamic too.

I feel pretty bad for Kin though; It would be a shame if Ron and Kim's relationship were to be come too strained or less intimate.. simply because she raped him. (Well it was all in good fun right)Wwithout her where would Ron be? Or for that matter; Shego, Bonnie, or the readers?

I'm glad to see you back online.

I keep reading this story hoping that one day you'll decide to eventually finish this thing. I really want to know what happens next. I mean come on it's like torture. It's like being stuck with nothing but "reality" tv to watch for all eternity. I hope you finish this story soon. Please the suspense is giving me an ulcer. Not really but it sounds good.

OMG!!! Ron made Shego have a kid, lol. I love where this story is going!! Please, continue!!

Second time I've read the story and it's still good I can't wait to see how you end this thing I'm loosin sleep over this man!