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Like the third time I've read this and as I read it I noticed something and was thinking about a few things. What I did notice was that Kim never actually apologized or truly felt bad about the incident after Ron found out. She didn't even give him the courtesy of feeling slightly ashamed. What I was thinking about is are you gonna have Ron fuck Monique and Mrs. Dr. P before the story ends they're a couple of my favorite female characters in these type of stories. Would really like to see that. Next what happened in that year before Ron found out, was it just the cheerleaders, and what was it like with the other girls especially Monique, Yori, and her mom. Finally what is the last sex scene going to be I was really curious about that can't wait for it.

Very good. not much to say beyond that. your description of Kim has given me a lot of inspiration for my own stories. I do, however, find it rather dissapointing that Monique isn't in on the punishment. I'm pretty certain that she would love getting in on the action and she was one of the few who didn't even try to lie to Ron after he found out.
Just a thought. after all it is your storie and I love it.

I'll say it again. This chapter is good. Good pacing, good content, good sex. Just plain all-around good. I know what I'd like to see in the final chapter, but then I"ve always been a romantic at heart. I caught one typo that we both missed, and even the spell-checker missed.

I'm looking forward to the climax (pun) and resolution of this one.

plase write more!

omfg this is one if not the best KxR ever plz keep me updated on anything u write. plz u r such an amazing smut writer plz email me on anything u wight my email is tramblie0@gmail.com

omg that was f-ing hot! plz plz write more!

Excellent work dude, I hope Monique and Kim's mom will be in the conclusion of the story. So that Ron can have some 'salt and pepper' on his speacial order of Kim Possibilities. Ghostpen69: I like my ghostikins idea, but I can't wait for your next chapter. So please keep up the fantastic work.

Very nice chapter! The only thing I would say is missing is the fact that Kim is not the only 'villian' here. Bonnie, the cheer team, etc. are all just as guilty. Kim's crime is particularly bad since he trusted her so much, but that doesn't change the fact that the others committed the same crimes.
Heh, if anal sex is the only 'first' that Ron can remember and claim as his own, I suspect Kim better watch her backside. That sort of thing can easily turn to a fetish. :)

Great to see this story back. I really like your style. (Though I'll admit I like the pre-waking chapters better for the concept) I'm sure I'll love the conclusion, but I'm hoping for Shego to make another appearance. (As well as the big Kim/Ron moment Kim has been hoping for) I also hope you plan on writing more afterwards.

Great job on the new chapter really liked the shower scene. Especially the closet dom, oh and its a masochist that enjoys pain a sadist likes to dish it out. Can't wait to see how you wrap the story though it's been a long time coming and I am pretty anxious.