errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so fing awesome really good ending. but i was just wondering does ron actually help take care of the kid or does he just pay for it, and will kim ever get pregnant.
schedule
February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Most fun I've had reading a fic in awhile. Thanks for writing it.
schedule
February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fan-FUCKING-tastic. the end.
schedule
February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Perfect ending, Jawelik. I couldn't have done it better myself.
Outstanding story.
Outstanding story.
schedule
February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool
schedule
February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man well worth the wait my friend you did the story justice with that ending. After that ending I feel better I mean nice build up and lead in. Liked the scene with her mom too. I always did have a thing for the older ladies something about experience that's a real turn on. Really wished there was a Monique scene in there too though, but as you said that's what sequels are for so can't wait for the next instalment. And congrats on being gainfully employed.
schedule
January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I wasn't a big fan of the middle of the story, but the ending was just what I hoped.
schedule
January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol Absolutely loved it! I like this side of KP. Love the story plot. Can't wait to continue reading. What made you come up with this idea? ~Rrede18
schedule
January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A nice conclusion to one of my favorite stories.
Hope to see the sequeals soon.
theotherdave
Hope to see the sequeals soon.
theotherdave
schedule
January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I've been waiting for the conclusion for so long to this story and it was amazing!
I particularly liked that they got together in the end; it seemed in the previous chapter like the story might end with Kim never getting forgiven which would've been a downer, even in a sex story. Ron getting blown away by Kim's skill was nice and that phone call from Bonnie was a hilarious idea.
Great writing man :)
I particularly liked that they got together in the end; it seemed in the previous chapter like the story might end with Kim never getting forgiven which would've been a downer, even in a sex story. Ron getting blown away by Kim's skill was nice and that phone call from Bonnie was a hilarious idea.
Great writing man :)