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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please add more, they have to do it with Ron awake or maybe Kim gets pregnant and has to tell Ron or Ron wakes up during the next knight.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great, I can’t wait to read more. I’ve always like that idea of taking my boyfriend where he’s asleep, but I’ve never acted on it… yet. I hope you write more soon. Maybe you should make the next one with Kim so egger to have Ron, that she mistimed her advances, and he wakes up on her, and gives her the best fucking of her life.
Hope you update soon.
Hope you update soon.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story..I hope the next one will be as good as this one. I hope that Ron will wake up one night when Kim is fucking him, and pretend to be asleep until she is done and then reveals that he was awake the whole time
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice hopefullly the next chapter will be up soon.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good for a first chap. We'll see what the others look like if you continue the story
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very good beginning. Well written, good pacing. I though it was good. As I read it, I was expecting something different at the ending. but then, thats just me. I do have some minor suggestions. If you want them, email me. But all-in-all, I liked what I read.
Now all you have to do is keep writing.
Now all you have to do is keep writing.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good characterization. Look forward for more.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was quite good. Dirty and kind of cute too.