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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I need a cold shower after reading that. Keep up the good work!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more very good
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow !! Great story !! I'm glad you didn't have Ron wake up. I like that he has no clue that Kim is having sex with him while he sleeps. I think you should make sleeping with Ron a little more of challenge for Kim. Mr.P could get upset that Ron is sleeping in the same room as his sweet Kimberly, and makes Ron sleep downstairs on the couch or something. Then Kim would have to find a way to sleep with Ron without waking up the whole house. Thats just one idea. Looking forward to the next update.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's kinda wierd because I keep feeling like Kim is raping Ron (which, I guess she technically is) but it made me feel a lot better when he was knew what was going on (even if he thinks it's a dream!) Anyway, pseudo-rape aside it's an awesome little fic and I'm glad you didn't have him figure out what was actually happening!
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I must say that this is one good story. I love how you bild up to the "climax" of the event and cool off with Ron wondering why he was felling so good without the mess. I do hope he figures it out not just wake up, I mean he could be in the caffateria where he realises (in chapters yet to "cum") what Kim's bin doing and wants to get even.
P.S.sorry for the bad puns and there is a nice pic of Ron and Kim at www. Sirkowski.com, its in the 2006 gallery, hope you like! ;) Later
I must say that this is one good story. I love how you bild up to the "climax" of the event and cool off with Ron wondering why he was felling so good without the mess. I do hope he figures it out not just wake up, I mean he could be in the caffateria where he realises (in chapters yet to "cum") what Kim's bin doing and wants to get even.
P.S.sorry for the bad puns and there is a nice pic of Ron and Kim at www. Sirkowski.com, its in the 2006 gallery, hope you like! ;) Later
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter 2, I loved reading it. I hope that Ron does buy a Pandaroo costume to see what Kim does to him during sleeping.
I hope also that Ron would wake up during the night and see what Kim is doing to him at night and it wasn't a dream. Keep up the good work
I hope also that Ron would wake up during the night and see what Kim is doing to him at night and it wasn't a dream. Keep up the good work
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I look forward to seeing where you take it. I'm with everyone who thinks Ron should find out but it's your story.
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really good. You've got Kim's perspective in the forefront, with the epsiode plot playing out in the background, making the whole thing seem more complete as well as dropping a few more ominous hints about the plot progression.
The scenes are quite vivid, as well as unique. Kim's dialogue, (both mental and real) and the moral ambiguity of Kim's behaviour helps make everything more intense too.
I'd say this story is hitting all the right notes.
The scenes are quite vivid, as well as unique. Kim's dialogue, (both mental and real) and the moral ambiguity of Kim's behaviour helps make everything more intense too.
I'd say this story is hitting all the right notes.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed this one! Kim getting a little on the side from Ron while he is deeply asleep, was pretty good. Maybe next time he could wake up and start some bedtime adventures with Kim. Looks like under these circumstances, Kim may not be looking far for a boyfriend...
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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