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lol... Ron got kidnapped and used for four days? lol...damn... seems like Shego was happy in the end. Too bad for Draken get beaten stupid... lol.... i feel bad for him. eh... not really, he doesn't deserve it...lol... adios for now ... and hope you update soon... its a funny read... Adios...

It's alright. There's a whole of lot of action but it tends to get repititive when there's sex in every chapter. I'm hoping Ron will realise what's going on and then when he and Kim have sex while he is awake, he turns out to be a total let down. XD

That'll be good. It would be also be nice if Kim had more feelings than just horniness ¬¬

But yeah. I enjoyed it, keep it up.

Peace. Keep It Sick.

Sickly.

Great chapter 4. I hope you will soon that Ron will wake up during the "sleepover". Keep up the good work man

You have gift for keeping things interesting.

WELL DONE, MAN!!!

This is easily one of the best KP stories I've ever read, and easily blows my Chapters out of the water. You got the dialouge and mannerisms down to a 'T', and made it just like I was watching the show. The only small problem I had with it was too little dialouge. But for how the story was set up, it really didn't matter. Hope you do more KP stories, man. It really showcases your talent. Thumbs up!

I guess the Ron turning evil and any potnetial complications it would have presented has been glossed over, (Though I have to admit I was temporarily thrown by the line which perhaps accidentally implied that Ron spent himself and not the night in the villain's lair ;)) but I really liked the examination of Kim's descent into depravity. Letting Ron convince her parents of her innocent intentions, the sometimes forceful way she gets Ron into the sack, and willingness to share... all great. You even had me fooled with Shego's Dr D trick. It's all really good, and not just because you've written some intense action.

This story is getting better and better, now that you've introduced my favourite character into the fray. But I’ve got to ask this. WHEN THE HELL IS RON GOING TO WAKE UP!!!!!!!!!!!

funny... lol.. its funny to see that ron still hasn't realized anything's wrong.. :) lol.... catcha when you update.... lol... adios...

Great work on chapter 3. can't wait for more

Ron is the luckiest basterd in the world and he dosn't even know it. I wonder why he never suspects anithing, wish he would fake being asleep and wait to see what happends. Love to see Kim's reaction to that. Anyway, good chapter can't wait for 4. Later :)