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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is sooooo gerat! so hot! ever since watching the secret of the fire nation, i've been totally wanting to see this pairing! great job! can't wait for chapter four.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how Sokka takes love over Hotness. Something that needs to happen more in our world... :P
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, it's nice to find a decent adult-oriented fanfic that isn't JUST about sex. I mean, that's pretty much what this is, but the approach is a lot deeper than you normally find, and you have a wonderful grasp on the characters. I can't wait to see how this all turns out!
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
compaired I most of the stories on this site this was great
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I mean't that compaired to most of the stories on this site this was good!
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing work. Add to it that you're good at summaries... Always have me wanting the next chapter.
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is INCREDIBLY written!
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly done. Not only in the prose, but you have such a magnificent way of writing dialogue.
This piece is high on my list, not just of adult fan fiction, but fan fiction in general.
You'd be surprised how many people think because they can open a text edit program that they can write a story.
But you have out done yourself, and I can't wait to see what happens with Toph and the always empathetic Sokka.
This piece is high on my list, not just of adult fan fiction, but fan fiction in general.
You'd be surprised how many people think because they can open a text edit program that they can write a story.
But you have out done yourself, and I can't wait to see what happens with Toph and the always empathetic Sokka.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd... that was SO hawt. Mmm...
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Greet story even though its only three chaps, I hope it's going to be atleast ten. Please continue the good work.