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for Feel It!

by Gunwild

person Zane
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ya but awsome story i usawaly dont read all of something(that would ecsplane y i fail every test i ever took lol)but i started reading this and hell i coudent stop reading it tell i was done and asom book i knew sence i saw secret of the fire natoin that toph and sokka were going to get together and than i sumbeld on to this (looking at pics on devian art)and know i'm righting this but plz some how tell me were i can find the other parts of it ()__/)
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person Yusanis
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Really enjoyed this, after seeing secret of the fire nation was glad to find your work. Great job, keep up the excellent work.
person tichri
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Honestly, I didn't think Toph/Sokka would work but...darn it all if you haven't made a 'shipper out of me with this! I've only got one nitpick: blind people don't see people's faces by touching them, we honestly don't care what people look like most of the time and base our thoughts on appearances on voice and personality. :P Hee, sorry, I'm just tired of certain stereotypes. Great writing, you got both characters spot-on (and Aang and Katara as well), it's got far more plot than anything else I've seen here (which made me want to keep reading), and great descriptions (not just of the sex, but that was awesome too :D). Again, excellent work!
person Spleef
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for such a awesome chapter!
person Lefty
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, though it did feel rushed here and there.

So tell me will there be a sequel with Sokka and June?
person Toph_Fanboy
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesomely done. The best Toph fanfic I've read so far. Hope you keep writing more fic's like this one. *Gives it a two thumbs way up* ^_^
person pear
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Theres going to be a sequel, thats so awsome thank you.
person animosity222
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow the best fic i read in a while! love chapter 5 when they get tangled in the tent! XD brilliant!
person Ivana C.
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. This is amazing! I honestly wasn't expecting much from a Toph/Sokka story, but, thankfully, you proved me wrong! I can't wait to read more! It's just incredible~!!!