rate_review Reviews

I pretty much gave up on fanfiction as a whole because of the crappiness of most fics. Many 'adult' fics seem to have been written by kids who haven't even jacked off yet, but you are reconciling me with this artform. You write really well, giving enough so I can get a clear mental picture of what's going on while avoiding encumbering the story. That whole scene where Toph asks Katara's advice is actually very sweet and totally credible. I was unsure about reading a fic with loli, but you made the masturbation scene look natural and -once again- sweet.

The sign of a well-rounded story, you give credible reactions to your characters and go beyond the sex to their emotions. The dream scene was beautiful. I never would have paired Toph and Sokka myself, but you make it all seem believable.

From the show I got the feeling Toph favored direct approaches, so I really liked how she breaks it off to Sokka. It was cute how they mock-insulted each other (is that from the show or did you come up with all that?). As I pointed out earlier, I was unsure about this fic because of the loli, but you made the lovemaking scene sweet because you make it clear that there is love between them, and love has it's own mind. I liked how Sokka is careful with her, and how she finally takes the initiative.

Man, you are a genious for finding such an elegant way for them to be alone. That lovemaking scene is one of the best I've ver read, and the ending was funny and cute. Can we fav stories and authors around here? This fic is a rare diamond in a sea of zircons.

I find it hard to get into fanfiction. I have tried to slog through the bowels of ff.net, and fichaven, but I have to flee in terror. Even knowing several "Good" fics, as suggested by a female friend, I just can't do it. Basically, all the fics I read are located on AFF.net, in the avatar section, so my choices are limited. I took a Chance with Feel It!

I need to learn to take a few more chances, because this one lead to brilliant dividends.

Honestly, Toph has gotten the short end of the stick when it comes to fics devoted to her, adult or not. Well, all right, I guess since I only read the fics here, ADULT is all I know, but, well . . . SHUT UP!

I have enjoyed, and expect to continue to enjoy, this fic (or else). Keep up the good work (OR ELSE!). I guess I couldn't keep the joking aside.

Awesome haikus. :3

Oooh, I loved it. Just the kind of Sokka/Toph story I'd been looking for.

asome story man

cool story

were the hell can i find the other parts to it