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for Luna-Tic

by Atomica_Syndrome

person Halcon
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am actually quite impressed, there was good detail, not too much stretch to any event and a surprising amount of plot potential in such a short entry. I am interested in finding out what will happen between Rue and Jack, conflict I'm sure but there has to be some connection. Please continue writing.
-I hope this review was sufficiently written and not overly wordy. Good fortune to you.