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for Mating Room 451

by endofoblivion

person anon
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that sucked. The half of it I read, anyway. Off to do something interesting like watch paint dry.
person Penname wa Silver B
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So the smeets were transferred to Gaz? Yikes! But MAN, this is interesting! Please continue!!
person Vampire Valo [[Never logged in]]
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>.o More please?

I loved it. Soooo in character

[x]V.v.
person Lydia Marie
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, great story! I hope that it wasn't a oneshot, I think that you could realy take it places! Thanx for the good writing! Lydia.
person miku
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOh you have to write another chapter about the last bit! I need to find out what the tallest have to add to make Zim truely miserable. Well written and interesting story, well done!
person Lightplaygirl
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh sure make me laugh up a lung why don't you!??! This is great! Having just the right amount of humor and darkness. Absoulutly excellent. Keep it up!!!
person Keri
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
argiloveyousomuch

you update or face a fate worse than whatever gaz is gonna do to dib
person Tugera of Deviantart
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol, great story, I loved it. ^^

Is this gonna be a one-shot, or is there more? I'd like more...