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for Neutral Ground

by arterybreak

person Evol
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooh....jakies in trouble! heehee....more plz!
person Kitten
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If I loved you and this story before....it's nothing compared to how I feel about it now! This is definatley the best Xaoilin Showdown story ever!!!!! Your the best writer in all the universe!!!! Your lemons are awesome as well as your story lol Update and I will give you yet another review filled with love!!!
person roundarosie
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am pleased.

Wonderful work on this chapter. "Yummy"

<3 muchlove
person ShadowofLight
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can I say jsut how great your fanfic is? For one thing, the pairing I admit I had my doubts but the way you portrayed it was so good! Second, I love how you captured Clay's personality so well!! Even the accent I can jsut picture him talking! You're amazing. Third, I really like the plot. I feel so bad for Jack and I hope to see something GOOD happen to him. I hope to see an update soon. Again I love your fic, I wanna read it again! Thanks for sharing :)
person senachan141
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fwee!! I love it!! I just can't wait for the next chappie to be up!! X3
person Niiro_Yuuyake
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've got to update soon! I loved that chapter. The lemon was hot, also! AND I'm curious as to what Chase will do. His Jack-bitch is another man's now...so how will he respond to it?

Update soon, I really want to see what happens now...
person oxcab
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that great love the tender lovemaking ^_^ but why was jack taking pills for?
person TicTac
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love your story so far, please update soon!
person lea
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAAAAA~~ bravo bravo, youre doing a great job!
person Kitten
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update damn you!!!!.....I take it back...You know I love u right? Just don't torture me anymore I must see what happens next or I will go insane!!!!