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for Neutral Ground

by arterybreak

schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely amazing and I loved it to no end. You did a fantastic job with it and I hope you continue to write more for them. I can not stress how much I loved this story haha.
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If these three chapters are the only ones, I will feel very angry. You should add some more chapters or something. There needs to be more drama, more action, more sex! LOL!
person foxy
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
we dont know the consequences either but we sure as fuck woiuld like to find out.
come on jack dont mess this up. but he probab;ly will. jsut watch, hell be back with chase before he realises he fucked up. stupid boy. but we love him!
person righthand
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know what would be funny and creepy at the same time? if chase had seen jack doing clay using one of his crowspying thingys. now that would be fuked up! is jack even allowed to sleep with clay during this missoin?
person 2U
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wait a minute...was jack supposed to sleep with clay?for his missoin? or was he just suposd to get freindly and maybe a lil touchy with him?
person Night Eyes
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i LOOOOOOVE it please write more please please with sugar on top
person Kitten
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why won't you update? Is it me? It's me...It's me isn't it?
...*sniff*...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAh!!!!!! YOU HATE ME!!!!!! Please update before I fall into spiraling depression!!!!
person Kitten
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHY WON'T YOU UPDAT!?!?! It's me, It's me. It's me isn't it? well I guess I'll just sit in a state of depression until you update, which will be greeted with many happy faces-----> ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ like that!
person catc10
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god chapter three is the hottest thing EVAR!!!
I don't know what to say, my mind has been blown into ittsy bittsy little peices of incoherent thought.
I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!
ME
person Kitten
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yet again I will love u lots if u continue this story....yeah...plz finish