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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Evilly delicious! Well written. Please continue.
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* Wow...you know, I did not think it was plausible but you managed to add another lawyer of deliciously-twisted sullenness to the already morose caricature of the world that Invader Zim represents. But...damn. You did one heck of an amazing job! Zim's characterization, especially given the story's circumstances, remains wonderfully loyal to that of his Earth-conquering days (with a newfound dash of crueluty); and his background story was thoroughly detailed and prodigiously-incorporated into the plot. As for Dib's characterization...I personally think that he would not submit to Zim (albeit under such nerve-rattling conditions) so quickly; but the inevitability of that happening, as well as the internal struggle leading up to it, carried said protagonist's personality very well (which, in other words means that I am being a big-headed pettifogger).
And the sex scenes? Hot. And I am almost positive that I have surged to the top of Hell's Most Wanted List for enjoying it (not that I was ever at the bottom of it...)
I also have to admit that your writing is very impressive - very detailed, impeccably connected and well-flowing - which you do not see often in fanfiction.
Overall, I think this story deserves a lot of praise and I commend you for writing it. Oh, and I hope that the the turbulence in your life eases - so good luck with that.
And the sex scenes? Hot. And I am almost positive that I have surged to the top of Hell's Most Wanted List for enjoying it (not that I was ever at the bottom of it...)
I also have to admit that your writing is very impressive - very detailed, impeccably connected and well-flowing - which you do not see often in fanfiction.
Overall, I think this story deserves a lot of praise and I commend you for writing it. Oh, and I hope that the the turbulence in your life eases - so good luck with that.
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Moooh, i really really love the story!!!
*______*
It's your best one i think.
What about Chap 5? ó__Ò
Can't wait any longer. *beg* T____T
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It's your best one i think.
What about Chap 5? ó__Ò
Can't wait any longer. *beg* T____T
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh bery intresting please update soon. and is there mpreg it this i thought i saw it but if there is power to you, you just dont see that many mpregs of ZADR.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More please, this is really awesome.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wuv you. This was so great. Why are there so few reviews? LAZY BONES!!! It's great! Forget what everyone else says, it's really really really really really really really really good. KEEP UP TE GOOD WORK.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Suspence, violence, and a baddass ship. What more can a reader ask for? A perfect fic, well writen, engaging, a triumphant Zim scaring the pants off the Tallest, really this is just too good. And all for the miniscule price of reading words. I eagerly await the next chapter.
-Rin
-Rin