rate_review Reviews

Wow. Seeing Zuko struggling so as not to crumble is heartbreaking. Thank you for your writing. This story truly has me absolutely captivated, and I eagerly await the next chapter.

i love this story ....it is your best work...its so dark.....keep up the great work please update soon

OMG! I can't WAIT until the next chapter. Yes this is dark, but in a very real way. And makes the longing for redemption and resolution all the more addictive. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...

bravo

Another thing about "darkness." it is this that draws me to Zuko in the first place. I acknowledge my inner shadow and light and it is very satisfying to read someing that explores both too. Fluffnstuff has it's place so to speak, but true psych and drama have depth. You can't dive deep without shadow. I find dark to often be a metaphor for brutally honest. You have the gift of exploring this side of humanity (read the fukkin news! *sigh*) and illuminate that beauty of self as it emerges from despair. Okay.. kinda heady for a fanfic review... but well ... accurate.

Finally! Now, hopefully, things can start to improve a little bit, maybe, perhaps... And I think you left out, "Mommy, when's the new Harry Potter gonna come out?" Bet that one gets on your nerves a lot, too! Hehheh, I'm a bad man... Laters!

yay! you updated on my birthday!! best present ever! yet another fantastic chapter. keep it up! xD.

good chapter! i understand with the whole needy child issue! I have two myself! lots of luck!

Good Luck! Great story so far, a bit dark, but I am eager to see Katara and Zuko reunited. You have really generated a unique storyline. Thanks.

Of course it wouldn't, that's why you caught it.(hehehe, sorry...)

This doesn't sound like it bodes well for Kaya... On the other hand, interesting use of Pathik, wasn't expecting him. Well, I look forward to the next part. laters.

Yay! New chapter! You continue to leave me wanting more! Can't wait 'til the next chapter!
[ps] Thank you for the update email!