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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! So glad they're back together! About ready for that "Happily Ever After" though! lol! Hope that the conflict gets resolved and Zuko regains his kingdom so he can really rule as Fire Lord properly! I also REALLY hope he heals from those injuries and gets back to normal! = S Guess I'll have to wait and see for all my questions to be answered! You're doing a great job though, keep it up! = )
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love your emotions and character interplay. It is so dramatic and intense! Don't appreciate our patience, m'dear! Yes, I check for updates even when I don't get an email... yes I am disappointed when they aren't there...BUT when I do get a good chapter "fix"... oo, all that suffering is instantly alleviated! Woo hoo! love it. I wish I could send you money and time so that all you had to do was feed the the fantasy sector of my brain! Wouldn't that be nice!
Until then, never look a gift horse in the mouth.
Well done as always and I eagerly await more!
Until then, never look a gift horse in the mouth.
Well done as always and I eagerly await more!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ This was so sweet! Well, kinda, it was also kinda dark. Hopefully Katara can turn Zuko's frown upside down...X)
Jeong JeongXMahari...o_0 this intrigues me...
So happy to see that you've updated! :D
Jeong JeongXMahari...o_0 this intrigues me...
So happy to see that you've updated! :D
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Noooo! How could you just leave me hanging like that?! I need more Zutara! Please finish the story before I explode!
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I want more so please continue because I asked nicely :)
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I imagine most of their reunion scenes in the next chapter will consist of Katara using her bending powers to heal him back up towards his previous un-scarred state, possibly helping to restore some of his lost memories in the process. And the delicious lemon reunion moment will be in the chapter after the next one. Well, don't take to long, unless you have too. Laters.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done (as always). You know my fave thing about your writing... is your emotional nuance. It is so well developed and expressed!! Very nice. Very powerful. I have tears in my eyes.
You were right... this is the perfect scene. NEver doubt your instinct in writing!
Many thanks and I always await the next chapter!
ALoha!
You were right... this is the perfect scene. NEver doubt your instinct in writing!
Many thanks and I always await the next chapter!
ALoha!
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was sweet. Hopefully Zuko will get more time with Katara. She'll make him better :) Though I wonder what's on that flag...the emblem of that crazy cult? o_0 Hopefully we'll find that out soon...
Gooooooood chapter!
Gooooooood chapter!
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so awesome i was on the edge of my seat.....you are right it's to soon for the reUNION scene.....this was a really good chapter cant wait to see what happens next update soon...i love this story
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O Whoah. It's so refreshing to see Mahari as *not* haveing all the answers.
Reunion chapter? :3 This will be so lovely...poor Zuko needs Katara so badly. And his babies, though he probably won't see his children for a while yet...
Excellent! *anxiously awaites next chapter*
And enjoy that vacation away from the kids :) Sleep is good.
Reunion chapter? :3 This will be so lovely...poor Zuko needs Katara so badly. And his babies, though he probably won't see his children for a while yet...
Excellent! *anxiously awaites next chapter*
And enjoy that vacation away from the kids :) Sleep is good.