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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oy.... Somehow I don't see a good end coming for Iroh's namesake. In fact, it rather sounds like he's been possessed by Ozai. And alas poor Pathik, soon to die by Knowledge Spirit wrath. Somehow, I don't think it'll be pretty... Oh, well. I eagerly await the next chapter. Laters.
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HEY! Looneyluna! You're alive!! ^_^ Just to make this known, it's me Yong Wing from AvatarSpirit.Net. I missed this story & heard it was on this site, so I got myself an account the day I turned 18.
Anywho... awesome update with Pathik's return & the prophecy reading. Interesting turn of events with little Iroh going over to the Dark Side. *sniff* Jeong Jeong... He was kick-ass. Well, anyways, can't wait to see how this all ends & turns out. ^_^ As for your hand, hope it's doing well.
Anywho... awesome update with Pathik's return & the prophecy reading. Interesting turn of events with little Iroh going over to the Dark Side. *sniff* Jeong Jeong... He was kick-ass. Well, anyways, can't wait to see how this all ends & turns out. ^_^ As for your hand, hope it's doing well.
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just happened to be browsing the site when I saw Sleefmistress's name. I *adore* her writing on vanilla ff.net and when I saw what stories she recommened we read I naturally (and like a good little fangirl) clicked the corresponding links.
Let me just say you have blown away all of my expectations. Your writing is beautiful, fluid, innovative, orignal, wonderful, and entertaining. I have been sucked into your Avatar world completely and hopelessly. Thank you for sharing your talent, for giving me something to do on the internet besides check my e-mail, webcomics, and the fansites for latest news on when the next damned episode of avatar is going to come out. God bless you woman, I hope your hands mend well throughout your various surgeries. Update whenever you can, whenever you are able, knowing I will be waiting with bated breath. You are a credit to your talent.
Let me just say you have blown away all of my expectations. Your writing is beautiful, fluid, innovative, orignal, wonderful, and entertaining. I have been sucked into your Avatar world completely and hopelessly. Thank you for sharing your talent, for giving me something to do on the internet besides check my e-mail, webcomics, and the fansites for latest news on when the next damned episode of avatar is going to come out. God bless you woman, I hope your hands mend well throughout your various surgeries. Update whenever you can, whenever you are able, knowing I will be waiting with bated breath. You are a credit to your talent.
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So good! U are so talented. Keep it up. Hurry up and Update!!! I wanna find out what happens next.
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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome awesome awesome great job on this chapter and story in general i love this story update soon
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story a few days ago.
I'm not a big fanfiction reader but your plot is even better than the smut. Well done!
This is very dark. I'm not sure how you could even breathe during the first few chapters, but I guess that was a long time ago.
Keep up the good work!
I'm not a big fanfiction reader but your plot is even better than the smut. Well done!
This is very dark. I'm not sure how you could even breathe during the first few chapters, but I guess that was a long time ago.
Keep up the good work!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, a story, huh? I wonder what Pathik has to tell them that's so important. Well, I look forward to the answers in the next chapter. Laters.
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was just... wow. I can only imagine what else you have planned for this story!
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, silly little nosey spirits. I hope that you update this story soon, I just got into it and I think that you are amazing! Untill next time, farewell!
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've never reviewed before (and in fact, it's rare that I ever review at all), but I've been reading and immensely enjoying your stories in the Avatar fandom for quite some time now. You have a rare talent for writing believable, in-character Zutara stories. Both Bitter Alliance and Price of Peace are throughly engrossing, and I always make sure I have a snack and a drink before I sit down to enjoy an update.
Bitter Alliance especially is unique and intriguing while managing to stay in character -- For Zuko in particular, which impresses me because he (more than any of the other Avatar gang) tends to fall out of character in these type of stories. Usually Zuko is too angsty, or too noble, or too powerful, and Katara is too submissive or too bitchy. I am beyond pleased that you have managed to find the right balance between their flaws. They fit so well together in your stories. Also, Bitter Alliance manages to pull of something that I have yet to master -- the convincing, engrossing first person narrator.
Your grammar is excellent (also rare in fanfiction) and you have a particular gift for putting interesting situations in the setting of the Avatar-verse. I actually can't think of anything off the top of my head (save for the occasional typo) that really seems like it need work. ^^I so enjoy your stories that I even recommend them to my friends.
I just wanted to say thank you, to show my appreciation in some way, for writing and sharing these wonderful stories.
Bitter Alliance especially is unique and intriguing while managing to stay in character -- For Zuko in particular, which impresses me because he (more than any of the other Avatar gang) tends to fall out of character in these type of stories. Usually Zuko is too angsty, or too noble, or too powerful, and Katara is too submissive or too bitchy. I am beyond pleased that you have managed to find the right balance between their flaws. They fit so well together in your stories. Also, Bitter Alliance manages to pull of something that I have yet to master -- the convincing, engrossing first person narrator.
Your grammar is excellent (also rare in fanfiction) and you have a particular gift for putting interesting situations in the setting of the Avatar-verse. I actually can't think of anything off the top of my head (save for the occasional typo) that really seems like it need work. ^^I so enjoy your stories that I even recommend them to my friends.
I just wanted to say thank you, to show my appreciation in some way, for writing and sharing these wonderful stories.