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for Bitter Alliance

by Looneyluna

person Anna
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
twiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiins^^
my god i hope everything is allright...
person Scorpinac
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good for you! Now, I ,ay well be the first to say this, or just the next in line, but I cort of thought you'd have Act II in it's own seperate fic on the Avatar page here. But whatever works for you. I await the next chapter and the revelation of Katara and Zuko's baby's gender. Laters.
person Anna
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uuuuuuuuuuuh
Zuko Katara baby!!!!!
bAAAAD OZAI!!!!!!
.. ok more please!!!!!
person Scorpinac
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing. I eagerly await the beginning of act two. Good luck with the Hurricane! (And then the problem was taken out of their hands when the Wraith returned and culled the Fire Nation before moving on to the remants of the Earth Kingdoms and Water Tribes, one Wraith doing everyone the big favor of feeding on Ozai until he was drained dry! Hahahaha! Oh, wait, wrong series...) Laters.
person nkuzmik
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 seems a little out of left field. Is it some kind of flashback?
person Spleef
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter per usual. I am so stoked to see what happens next.
person Scorpinac
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I sense a rescue involving someone named Toph(possibly Haru or Bumy, or all of the above!) coming... Hehhehheh. ;) Laters.
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um, but if it's only been a few days since her last period, which is what it currently feels like, then they got a good four to four and half weeks before whether or not she bleeds again becomes a problem - last I checked, and I have a younger sister to back this data up, girls only menstruate for five to seven days in a twentyeight to thirty day cycle. Just saying.
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm....rather dark but I like it! Does the old lady eventally learn to airbend or will another pop up to "keep balence"? And as an idea of randomness, what prevents Toph from getting the fire lord lured outside and being sucked to the center of the earth?....Nah your story is great as is, please update soon!
person Spleef
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(hugs the couple) poor them! Keep up the good work!