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for Bitter Alliance

by Looneyluna

person Nika
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The plot is EXCELLENT! I cant wait until you update! I have one question though: Where is Azula in all of this?
person mel
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is an awesome story, and very well written. This is the first Avatar story I've read and I'm glad, because it is great. Good job.
person j
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait until there is more...please write more!
person burt22
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is such an awesome story! I cannot believe that I just found it. I love it! I cannot wait until the next chapter! You rock out loud!

b_g
person Scorpinac
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Neat. Now if only they can havea reunion so Zuko can meet his kids! Well, I leave it to you. Laters!
person Anna
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
;____;
poor seperated...
person Scarylady
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O Oh. My. Goodness. THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! It's...so deliciously plot twisty. :) :) :) :) I'm kinda at a loss for words...it's so wonderful :D I can't wait to find out what happens next :)
person Scorpinac
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, then, new Avatar's a girl, huh? But is there any hope of besting Ozai? That is the question! Can't wait for the next one! Laters.
person Anna
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
They live ^^
Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaah
*doing a little dance*
CHA CHA CHAAAAA!!!!!!
nOw..... Ozai has too diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeee....
die Ozai die!!!!
person Scorpinac
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, didn't see that coming! While I'll be pretty pissed if Katara is dead, I can understand it, all things considered. Now I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Kudos! Laters.