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by Looneyluna

person k15
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What! The end of the fic!
Zuko: Weren't you listening?
Me: I was, but right now there is no more. I wanna know what happens. I'm so into this.
Zuko: *shrugs* Makes sense
Me: true true. Anyway, keep up the good work. Until next time. Later. K15
person Minniemayh2o
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was absorbed into your world. This is a fantastic peice and I hope your surgery goes well...or you get someone to type for you *wink* I've always been a fan of Katara/Zuko pairings and this just juststifies how perfect they are for each other. They both drive each other a little insain but they also keep eachother sane, contratictory sure but wow what a combo! I found myself wanting to comfort Katara and standing beside Zuko in battle. This was to say the least, awesome
Good luck with your surgery
person Review-Dee
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, beautiful. :)
The first chapter especially was amazing, you could feel everything- and the mood was perfect. Morbid and yet allring with tiny sparks of hope. Chapter two, however, though still wonderful, a bit dull. It seems as though a lot of the times, chapters were repeated with little change in storyline besides the fact that time has passed. I'm glad things are picking up a bit with the new update.

Another thing that I have to add, is I think that this story sticks out a lot from the others. There is a good healthy amount of smut, and yet that's not all too it. It carries along with it romance and a very amazing storyline.

Oh, and I hope surgery goes okay. :D I have mild carpal tunnel, I can only immagine how horrible it would be sevre.
person Scorpinac
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, very nice, and either this will turn out to be a dream of Zuko's, or Ozai probably isn't quite dead yet either. Oh, well. Either way, good luck with that surgery, hope it works out okay. I will await patiently. And I think you meant "Pun is intended", not "Pun in intended". Just saying. Laters.
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is marvelous and I hope you have a speedy recovery
person Emily (SxK_YGOfan)
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Awesome chapter! I know Zuko will pull through! Loved the preview for the future in the end of the last chapter! It will all work out! Hope you feel better soon! Congrats on finishing the Act! Keep up the awesome work! = 3
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fanstatic chapter. Good luck and we will be waiting for your return.
person Scarylady
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:D YAY! Crazy Firelord is dead! Though how Zuko will survive is going to be interesting...Good luck with your surgery! I hope you feel better soon :)
person Spleef
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The first part of the chapter was nice, but I also loved the smut. Best of luck with your wrists.
person Scorpinac
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I wish you look on getting, and getting through, that surgery. Things are definitely getting interesting, and the "sneak preview" was much appreciated! Laters.