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for Bitter Alliance

by Looneyluna

person Angel
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have one word.....Brilliant. and one request......LEt me know when your updating =}
person Spleef
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn. This chapter was thrilling.
person QJD
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! FINALLY AANG DIES!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALL BAD GUYS PREVAIL! YAHOO!!!!!!!!!!!
person Scarylady
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O Whaoh. Poor Zuko. Ouch, man. I hope he gets better soon...
Amnesia...used correctly it can be good,used badly...>_<
Really, really good chapter! *squeal*
person chris
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome girl! Very nice chapter... and tastefully not too graphic. While I find the power of confidence, desire, intensity and the play of subtle respectful domination sexy ... I have the same feelings as you of course about rape. But fit well into the story.

Poor Zuko! I hope Katara finds him and helps heal him emotionally.

Such a well-written story, girl! Don't give up on the price of peace though! If you ever want to bounce ideas off of anyone, you have my email! Please sign me up for the update notices!

Update soon! I so much enjoy this story...

person Scorpinac
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Does makea certain amount of sense, though. I'm guessing that in the future a certain vial of sacred spring water is going to some into play? Can't wait for the next one! Laters.
person Scorpinac
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And as to Mai and Ty Lee, they could always pop up among either Zuko's followers or in the desert with Katara - the latter scenario being they opted to put as much distance between them and Ozai as possible after Azula went down, and have been traveling here, there, and everywhere since, and have now wound up here. Ain't karma a bitch? Laters.
person poornmiserable
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good job on this chapter....the whole amnesia thing even though its been done it actually works for you fic....i hope you update soon keep up the good work :)
person k15
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool.
Zuko: Wow, I love the way you've developed my character.
Me: Yeah exactly.Anyway, keep up the great work. Later. K15
person J
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
as always i loved it! put me on your update list you can! Love your stories!!