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by Looneyluna

person Tennyo Akana
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter can't wait for hte next one!
person Scarylady
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice way to work in Pathik! Wow, Mahari is his daughter...he's sweet though :) Can't wait to find out what happens next!
person Spleef
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It';s so rare to see Azula be civil to her uncle...
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating! YOu just add layers and layers of concepts and plot. Beautifully done as always!

Many thanks.
person maegan
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good. i really liked all of the chapters soo far. really lookin forward to the next few chaps. keep up the good work.
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolute, undeniable genius. Please, please, please send me an email when you update! Please! And keep up the excellent work! xD.
person QJD
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Toph????
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the Fic, I hope your surgery went well. And remember... the world is made up of ....

LOVE AND PEACE!!!!!
person Scorpinac
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god, Azula actually turning good and being sane?! The world, no, the universe has just ended!:0 Okay, I'm good. Hehheh, very interesting chapter this time, nice plot exposition, makes sense, all things considered. I look forward to the next chapter. Laters.
person Tennyoakana
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHH I read your story from beginning to end! *_* i'm so into it's crazy. To be honest half of hte characters you mention I have no idea if they're real or fake. Granted I know the main ones of course. >>;; Really all I know is what my youngest cousin records and lets me watch...

But I so enjoy this story and I can't wait to read more, I want to see Zuko and Katara's reunion!!