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by Looneyluna

schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE START WRITING MORE! I'm dying without it!
person Sarah
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing and beautiful story. And that is to say the least. I stayed up all night reading this because the story flows and captures the reader to the point where they can't stop reading. I dearly hope that you decided to continue this story. It is one of my favorite I have ever read.
person henandchicks
schedule November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The scene whenZuko meets Kaya is so beautifully developed. Wonderful!
person Weatherwax
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so excited to read your next chapter!! Please post soon!!
person Me...who else
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is great!!! Fantastically written!! But I have a question, how old are Iroh and Kaya at the end of the last chapter???
person Alex
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH! Hold up..... To me it sounded like Iroh has Ozai's spirit.... THAT SUCKS!!!! Good story by the way...if only you would update :'( It's been what? 5 months? :'( Come on lady pppppppppplllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!! Believe it or not people still read your story (I started reading this a month ago :D ) plz update I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
forgive me i dont even know if u are still here on this site by I just come across your fics and I reviewed "prisoner of war" but as i started to read bitter alliance I read the first and second chapters and half way through the second I burst into tears, I already got the terror and fear and lonliness and broken pieces that these two people are and poor sokka, i was a bumbling mess. This is fucking brilliant I have read alot of fics for a very long time and very few ppl have gotten such a emotion crash out of me as u did, and its only 2 chapters I brace myself for the rest and implore you and beg you to continue these wonderful fics you have left behind. my email is scarlet_witch_extreme@hotmail.com.

Respect
Scarlet
person Raven
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And this is another wonderful story! I do hope you finish this one as well as Price of Peace. They are both really excellent. Thank you for sharing what you have so far, and I hope you will return to complete these.... :)
person FadeAwayBlond
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update I miss this story
person Stratas Stargazer
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I hope your next installment comes soon!