rate_review Reviews

Well, all in all a thorouglywel written story, with a few open endings (Bonnie, Yuri, new body...) giving you the opportuity to continue the story with at least another 2 or 3 chapters. There is one big minuspoint thugh, and that is the spelling.It`s so bad in some parts of the story one can hardly follow the story because the letters don`t make any sense. So please find an editor or correct the mistakes yourself, because at the moment large parts are not readable, givinh it a score of perhaps 4.5 out of ten, but if corrected and rewritten in some minor places has the potential for a 9-9.5 out of ten score.









archfiend

that was awsome but short

Oh oh oh naughty Kimmie. I hope that wasn't Shego watching, as she'd kill then. But you've got to let Ron get him some of Shego. Shego is so sexy, she'd pleasure Ron so much better then Princess can. If it was Yori... well fuck Yori you've always been third place on the RonOmeter. Its Shego Kim Yori for the gorgeous Ron Stoppable. I'd like to see a foursome with those three girls and Ron. But if it doesn't happen its no problem, just as long as Yori doesn't get any and Ron gets plenty of Shego and Kim.

Great story you got. but you should really grammar and check your work before publishing.
Either way I'm waiting for the next part

Interesting,will shego join in and enjoy a lil ronshine too??

I'd say that Ron should say that he wants to start dating. It should help if he has no idea of what happened with Josh. That way Kim would feel that he's willing to take a really big risk in asking Kim. That and she wouldn't feel like he was trying to take advantage of her in any way.

Go for A. That would be a great way for Ron to find out about Kim and Shego. Right as they're about to do him.

I'd say they should go to Shego's house. They could easily be seen in the car, and I don't think that Kim would be comfortable like that. While, I don't think that either wants to forget that it happened.

Go with A.^_^

I wonder if ron's training in monkee kung fu will have both girls purring like kittens when he gets them both in the sack