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for Define 'Incest'

by Leftshoe

person themaster
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what was the point of that last 'chapter' the storyline (when present(maybe a better word would be senerio and stile)) was good spelling was ok (for example wraped is spelled with a w) and i liked it keep up the good work
person writer33
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes another chapter would be nice
person skyman
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really liked the story. I would like to know what you mean by "another", though.
person UzumakiIno
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Second chapter was all right, but it seemed very rushed.
person kitsunexmaxwell
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cousin relationships aren't defined as incest in the bible. The US is the only western nation that has laws against cousin couples and most laws made predates modern genetics so are just as prejudiced as segregation laws ^^'

Interesting story, love the couple. Also, Ben and Gwen share the same day for their birthdays and both are 10 years old in the series.

Good luck and Happy Writing
-K.M.
person horny idiot
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Make more chapters. I hardly go off on this insest/ minor fic. hahaha.
person random dude
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!
Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!
Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!Encore!!!
person weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, your probably one of the best writers on AFF. Why the hell is there so much Yaoi for this series???
person The Black Miroku
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a good story...but the paragraphs wer placed too close together...other than that it was good just add more...content.
person cio
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im glad your saying more chapters but you should have put more detail into
chapter 2
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