schedule
October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really good so far.
I'd like to see a sequel.... if you get around to it.
Overall really enjoyable, but how about making Jimmy and Cindy get vengeance on Nick?
Just throwing it out there,,,perhaps put it in the sequel.
Keep writing,
4.5/5 Stars!~
I'd like to see a sequel.... if you get around to it.
Overall really enjoyable, but how about making Jimmy and Cindy get vengeance on Nick?
Just throwing it out there,,,perhaps put it in the sequel.
Keep writing,
4.5/5 Stars!~
schedule
May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was ok.
Not the best ive ever seen.
lotts of potental though.
Not the best ive ever seen.
lotts of potental though.
schedule
April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great addition to your story, you're building it up nicely. I cant wait for the next installment!
schedule
January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Your characters are well written and the story line is compelling. You could expand this story into several more chapters easly. A revenge chapter, for the way Nick treated Cindy. A continuation into Cindy and Jimmy's new explorations of each other. Or maybe Jimmy using time travel so he could start things earlier with Ciny, possibly to save her from herself.
I hope you will continue with these chapters.
I hope you will continue with these chapters.
schedule
August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic! Update soon!
schedule
July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are you going to add another chapter? if so please tell me when its posted thanks!
schedule
July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story it had a great plot but there were alot of spelling mistakes. I give it two thumbs up but you should go back and fix the spelling errors. I look forward to reading the next chapter, if there is one.
schedule
July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey good story, try to finish it. :)