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Please continue this story with Wade being able to contact Kim when needed so submissive Kim can be with dominant Kim and her slaves

Just finished reading this, and thought I'd throw a few ideas at you as you seem a bit stuck. Do hope you don't mind!

'Our' Kim is 'Their' Kim's slave now, wit a get-out clause that if she doesn't find a way for Wade to contact her in that dimension, she's free to find a new mistress after x amount of time...

How about having it so it's getting desperately close to the deadline, and 'our' Kim's getting worried she'll be without a mistress. Wade gets her with a mission, still no closer to having found an answer, and [as usual] its a Dr. D and Shego job.

Fighting Shego reminds 'our' Kim of watching 'their' Shego beating up a punchbag, and the train of thought ends up with her thinking 'our' Shego would be an ideal choice for her new mistress... so she asks, Shego ponders this for a while [after recovering from the shock of being asked such an odd question, accepts, Kim's all happy, then Wade tells her he's found a way to communicate between dimensions, just inside the deadline.

'our' Kim's all confused cuz she's now effectively got 2 mistresses, so goes back to 'their' Kim to explain herself, and 'their' Kim says there's only 1 way to settle the matter, that being a duel of some variety...
Obviously, winner takes the slave.

Feel free to tell me where to stick myself, but thought it worth speaking up as I was getting into this...

It took me a while to relize there was a new chapter i thought for sure that this story was dead i'm glad you put this up i hope there will be more because your own of the best yuri writers on the site

With Love;Love Imasuky Lomae

Amazing stuff. We hope KIm gets a spanking for such rampant disobedience!
Love,
Heather and Anna

Ooooo. Certainly good. I hope the next chapter doesn't take as long as this one has. I just can't wait to see who it is that Kim finds in her dimension, or if Wade'll be able to get that communication working without a problem. No matter which way you go, I certainly hope to see more of this.

great chapter i can't wait to see what is in store for kim next

more, please! Please! It is such a grea fic!

Can we please see a 3rd chapter? otherwise we are prepared to write it!
Love,
Heather and Anna

Please write more

That was good if you want to I would very much like it if you did more chapters cause this could be very good

With Love; Imasuky Lomae