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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I can't say I expected this to be continued, but you're doing it spendidly. About my only complaint is when you accidentally said "neccesitate" when you meant "resuscitate". I look forward to the next entry. Laters.
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's quite a worriesome world Kim's living in. This story seems to have departed from your usual style, but you clearly show here that you've got a good ability to establish a setting. I'm looking forward towards seeing where this goes. Will it be a frolic, or maudlin like the opening?
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, neat. Very well done. Arguably a fitting end to the three nimrods, but a shame for por Paisely and McHenry. So, in this reality, did Tim and Jim buy it in that explosion, or are they just elsewhere, recovering? Well, laters.
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this sounds like a great start to a good story!