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so we have 'all your base' 'the fly' 'the halloween episode' and a scene that really resembles teh disturbing last scene of 'the doom generation,' probably untintentional. You are the lord of the parody.
_melissa

Oh yeah, and...

THIS AIN'T NO WALK IN THE PARK
THIS AIN'T NO PUNCH IN THE FACE
THIS AIN'T NO FUCK IN THE ASS
THIS AIN'T NO PLANET OF NO APES!

That's the only one I spotted though XD I dunno if there's more or not.

omgWUTTHAFUCKK?????/

LIK THAT WSSO STUPD BUT OH caplock, ops. but t was funn y 2 i gess, ya. leike i lkd teh chhinchila bleeedin an gir as gudd. butt OMG u rote sex an its gay zsex 2, zim and dim r n0t gey an teyer liek, littel kids 2 so thats fuckd upp neway i nevre read sex stuff 2 much i only com heer 2 reed gorey shit, im 19 rly so w/e. yea so i rlly feel bad 4 dib bc no 1 undrstansd him an al o everybody s meen 2 him, nobody lieks me in schholl iether but fuck them, so iu worte dib getting hrut 2 so ya thats sort of meen, but hey w/e its a story so i guees tsi not so bad i guess.. so yeah i likesd it it wssa randowm an tathas guud. :DDD mayeb put less sexs in it that geay shit is wierd ok?ok so yea bai.

Good god, I couldn't help but laugh at this. And I felt so dirty. I'm actually quite glad you switched to a slightly less descriptive form of writing for that last bit. Dear God, if I knew what exactly they were really doing, I would probably never be able to read/write/draw ZADR again. ROFL.

I definitely caught on to a bunch of wonderful cliches in this one. Haha, I don't think I'm guilty of too many of them. XD I love that part of Dib actually LIKED it. I have to admit that I don't understand some of the fics that have Dib (or Zim) being tortured, going through horrendous pain for the joy of the other, only to somehow become attached to his torturer and begging for more.

I haven't read a whole lot of fanfic in general, so there's a lot out there I haven't been subjected to. Yet. Thank God. Though that also puts me at a disadvantage as I don't always know when a concept has been used already.

omg lyk thes wuz gr9t!!11 lawl su g00d omg wridt mur!11111111111111111111111111

lolz n teh prt were zim wuz al "oo psurt lawl kthen wuz rly gruoz butt i liekd it lawl

i r emo tu i lke emo dib he su hawt lawl writ mur plz omg lawl

you're insane XD I must contuinue reading

*snerk* XD Sorry it took me so damn long to reveiw...I just had to get over that hilariously disgusting last bit there. Because wow, that was so bad it made me die a little inside (but it was a useless part of me, whoo!) I gotta say, you win for hilariously great parodies of bad fanfiction XD I loved the beginning bit...I literally had to watch 'All Your Base' yet again after I read that bit XD Then when it changed to script...jeezus, that has to be something that would make the Jhonen proud for the simple 'reaction-getting' material that it was *remembers movie 'idea' from one of the Meanwhile comics* XD

In any case, sorry again it took me so long, and I'm very much looking forward to chapter two! E-mail it to me whenever you're ready and if you are still haveing trouble posting, okay?

lmao, that was hilariously DISGUSTING! XD It's wonderful, and I look foreward to more. ^_^

*falls out of chair laughing* Ouch I just hit my sunburn........ That was awsome! I was planning on leaving after I read the intro (I'm not one for parady fics) But when I read the first dozen sentences of the story I was hooked. This has truly made my pain riden day better.

Love and light,
Rin

I really wish all IZ fanfiction was like this. This is just totally cracked out and I love that. I also find it neat that this story is sort of mixed with MSI songs. I recognized the song in this chapter, so i are ttly smrt lol.


But anyway, really awesome story so far and I can't wait to read more of it in the future. :D