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by rinflowers1986

person Anaheyla
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.....I like your story. Needs more smut but other than that... it's great. Can't wait to see what happens next a nd definitely can;t wait for the smut to start. ;)
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear lord I want more NOW!!! ><
person imperial13
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ms. Flowers, i am truly ashamed of you. not once have you emailed me, of chatted or anything. i enjoy your writings please see my new story.

originals (to) romance (to) the raven, the rabbit, and the wind.

from your loyal, royal friend, Imperial 13
person Shwa
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very Dramatic, the feelings of Dash about his hero and the person he use to abuse is very powerful. I loved reading this chapter!

~Shwa'
person Shwa
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No Worries, as long as the story continues its all good :D:D Though some action between the two would be hot and cute, the drama and story line keep me hooked.

~Shwa'
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter as always. Now i hate to sound like a perv but when are we going to see some harry dash action I mean it dons't have to be full out sex but at least a decent snog session would be nice. Anyways asome chapter and please hurry and update
person Shwa
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work and story, I cant wait to see what happens next ^.^

~Shwa'
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh, things are heating up now.

Rumors are going to fly! I can't wait. *Dances in chair*
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gaydar *Tehee* gotta love it. Faboulus job so far and hurry and update
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter ten confused me at first, because you have a chunk of chapter nine in it.

Anyway, I felt really bad as Danny was breaking down and yelling at Dash, because I didn't realize how upset he was and I was just laughing. . . I fell of the fucking ship! It still gives me the giggles.

I liked the way you described how Danny felt like the one being protected when it came to Dash. I wonder, how the news of Dash spending the night at Danny's will slip out. That can't look good on top of that photo.

And looked the way Dash quickly snapped up when he realized he had kissed Danny's temple. I thought it was too cute.

Please update soon. I'm really enjoying the story. =D


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