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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My brain is melting out my ears after that... Wow! could Firecst possibly be any hotter? God, I love Azula. She's so dark, twisted and utterly devoid of conscience. I love how you've written her. The contempt she has for Zuko is really well done. Zuko's reactions are perfect. The poor boy, he really is Azula's sub. You're descriptions are fantastic and so fitting in with the tone of the piece. I very much enjoyed this piece. It's one of the best Avatar fics around.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was great! Azula is so perfectly evil. And with Zuko, she's really at her best.
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful. You should do a second part to this. ^__^
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Zuko/Azula pairing I've come across and it's really good so far. I hope to see more chapters soon.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yummy X3
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had seen this story somewhere before and planned on contacting you to invite you to adultfanfiction.net. I love the Azula/Zuko pairing and hope you'll write more stories similar to these, perhaps including Ty Lee and May in the fun. The story was pretty cool but I feel like I should remind you that this place is different, and some might say better, than fanfiction.net. You can be as explicit or raunchy as you want here, either in the descriptions or the story's plot itself, and no one is going to call you on it.
Like I said, I liked the fic but that last bit with the soldiers and the hint that they were going to give him a lobotomy or something...Well, I generally like the earlier tone of the story better. I mean it's dark, but it's JUST dark enough to make the story that much sexier and not dark enough to make it aggravating and creepy. All in all though, I feel it was one of the better Avatar stories here. I'm looking forward to your next fic.
Like I said, I liked the fic but that last bit with the soldiers and the hint that they were going to give him a lobotomy or something...Well, I generally like the earlier tone of the story better. I mean it's dark, but it's JUST dark enough to make the story that much sexier and not dark enough to make it aggravating and creepy. All in all though, I feel it was one of the better Avatar stories here. I'm looking forward to your next fic.