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for the Pube Muppet adventures: ATLA

by Rylasasin

person Mariposa
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, this chapter was just a wee bit better than the four before. But youe grammar is so very bad and this is not even my first language. You must pay more attention in your language class.
person Liz
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh... my... o____o