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for Forever the Child

by Evilevergreen

person Will
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a good short. You are quite skilled at writing
person Kat
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely - there was really a chord of deep, touching emotion running through that. Very sad, but that was partly what made it so good.
person roundarosie
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad and touching. The emotions were portrayed beautifully.

Wonderful work.
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Touching, very touching.
I also think I sense an element of truth to the tale, am I right?
I'm not sure anyone would or could write like that unless it was something that was a part of them.
Whether true or not it's beautiful, for lack of a better word.