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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. At first I thought it was going to be one of those stories where they're cold and the only way to stay warm is to get down and dirty. The bunker is very convenient indeed. I like where this is going though so I hope to see an update soon.
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good setup to your story. I am hoping that you will be continuing it. I worry that as you have titled the first chapter as just 'Untitled', many potential readers will be immediately turned off and not bother reading your story. Please allow me to suggest two possible titles for your first chapter:
1. Kim & Shego Escape The Collapsing Lair
or
1. Kim & Shego Escape The Collapsing Lair & Must Cooperate Or Die
P.S. don't bother writing out 'Chapter One: etc.' like so many other authors do.
1. Kim & Shego Escape The Collapsing Lair
or
1. Kim & Shego Escape The Collapsing Lair & Must Cooperate Or Die
P.S. don't bother writing out 'Chapter One: etc.' like so many other authors do.
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start! can't wait for more
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you registered at the KP Slash Haven.You can call me prophecy,proph,or Shavonne over there.
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.Update soon.
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff.
Are you going to post this fic on www.kpslashhaven.net?
Are you going to post this fic on www.kpslashhaven.net?
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story.I can't wait to read the next chapter.