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Mmm...well...that was so incredibly yummy...I love dirty talk!

September of which year?

*drools* more write more ^-^
that was very hot and smexy X3

wow.... everytime i read this it blows me away. I can't get enough!

I read it.

AND LIKED IT A LOT.

FanF*ckingTastic i really liked it...you should do more <3

Wowsers, that was H-O-T! Not to mention some of the most elegant writing I’ve seen in… ever! Truly inspiring! Zim and Dib were appropriately in-character, being neither too bland nor too insane, but a good middle ground. The sex scene was descriptive enough to be considered ‘erotic’, but not so detailed where it was gross. Hurray for seme` Dib, too! My day is brightened whenever an author doesn’t unnecessarily uke-fy a character. That applies to Zim, in this story, as well.
It may have just been my imagination, though, but it seemed like the second half of the chapter could have used one last sweep for errors. Missing commas and such. Not nearly bad enough to hurt the fic, but this is a review, right? Other than that, this has made me just so happy. Really, this is just a solid story. I’m impressed. Thank you for writing it!

OMG! That was fricken hot!

You must continue...You must or I will hunt you down and spork you...SPORK you I SAY!


Ahem...nicely done.

Whatever were you worried about? This is brilliant.

Update soon.....*spork*

Wow.....that was great! I really like it! Actually, I humbly request that you write more Dib/Zim stuff. That was most definitely the hottest Dib/Zim I have ever read. I'd like to see this one continued, maybe some stuff about Zim's way-back past? Yeah, well, I'm just happy you wrote this. Rock on, nifty one!

Wow. Just wow. Oh yeah, are you going to update, cause I'll R&R if you add more.